Olentangy Local School District
Literature Selection Review
Teacher: Jill C. Hartley
School: OHS
Book Title: The Other Wes Moore
Genre: Nonfiction
Author: Wes Moore
Pages: 233
Publisher: Spiegel & Grau
Copyright: 2010
In a brief rationale, please provide the following information relative to the book you would like
added to the school’s book collection for classroom use. You may attach additional pages as
needed.
Book Summary and summary citation:
The chilling truth is that his story could have been mine. The tragedy is that my story could have
been his.
Two kids named Wes Moore were born blocks apart within a year of each other. Both grew up
fatherless in similar Baltimore neighborhoods and had difficult childhoods; both hung out on street
corners with their crews; both ran into trouble with the police. How, then, did one grow up to be a
Rhodes Scholar, decorated veteran, White House Fellow, and business leader, while the other ended
up a convicted murderer serving a life sentence? Wes Moore, the author of this fascinating book,
sets out to answer this profound question. In alternating narratives that take readers from heart-
wrenching losses to moments of surprising redemption, The Other Wes Moore tells the story of a
generation of boys trying to find their way in a hostile world.
Wes Moore is a Rhodes Scholar and a combat veteran of Afghanistan. As a White House Fellow, he
worked as a special assistant to Secretary Condoleezza Rice at the State Department. He was a
featured speaker at the 2008 Democratic National Convention, was named one of Ebony
magazine’s Top 30 Leaders Under 30 (2007), and, most recently, was dubbed one of the top young
business leaders in New York by Crain’s New York Business. He works in New York City.
(barnesandnoble.com)
Provide an instructional rationale for the use of this title, including specific reference to the
OLSD curriculum map(s):
This text provides opportunities at all high school grade levels to examine the authors devleopment
of his story as well as the structure of the text istself. This selection also provides an opportunity as
our common book to discuss the choices we make in our lives and how they impact our futures
while building a community conversation in our building on this concept.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.CCRA.R.3: Analyze how and why individuals, events, or ideas develop
and interact over the course of a text.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.CCRA.R.5: Analyze the structure of texts, including how specific
sentences, paragraphs, and larger portions of the text (e.g., a section, chapter, scene, or stanza) relate
to each other and the whole.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.CCRA.R.6: Assess how point of view or purpose shapes the content and
style of a text.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.CCRA.R.8: Delineate and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a
text, including the validity of the reasoning as well as the relevance and sufficiency of the evidence.
Include two professional reviews of this title:
Review #1
When Wes Moore won a Rhodes scholarship in 2000, The Baltimore Sun published an article about
his triumph. He was the first student at Johns Hopkins to win a Rhodes in 13 years, and the first
black student there ever to win the award.
At about the same time, The Sun published articles about another young African-American man,
also named Wes Moore. This one was facing charges of first-degree murder for the killing of an off-
duty police officer named Bruce Prothero, a father of five.
Both Wes Moores had troubled youths in blighted neighborhoods, difficulties in school, clashes
with authority and unpleasant encounters with police handcuffs. But one ended up graduating Phi
Beta Kappa and serving as a White House fellow, and today is a banker with many volunteer
activities. The other is serving a life prison sentence without the possibility of parole.
One of us is free and has experienced things that he never even knew to dream about as a kid,” the
successful Wes Moore writes in a new book, “The Other Wes Moore.The other will spend every
day until his death behind bars. ... The chilling truth is that his story could have been mine. The
tragedy is that my story could have been his.”
For me, the book is a reminder of two basic truths about poverty and race in America.
The first is that American antipoverty efforts have been disgracefully inadequate. It should be a
scandal that California spends $216,000 on each child in the juvenile justice system, and only
$8,000 on each child in the Oakland public schools.
Far too many Americans are caught in a whirlpool of poverty, broken families, failed schools and
self-destructive behavior that is replicated generation after generation. The imprisoned Wes Moore
became a grandfather last year at 33.
The writer Wes Moore offers clues from his own experience about how boys get sucked into that
whirlpool.
His father, a radio and television journalist, died of a virus after a hospital emergency room
seeing only a disoriented, disheveled black man misdiagnosed him and sent him home to get
“more sleep,” Mr. Moore writes. The writer Wes grew up in a poor, drug-ravaged neighborhood of
the Bronx.
His mother worked multiple jobs and scrounged to send him to Riverdale Country School, an elite
prep school, but Wes felt out of place among wealthy, white students and his black friends at
home teased him for going to “that white school.” Wes skipped classes, let his grades slip, hung out
with a friend who was dealing drugs, and collided with the police.
Despairing, Wes’s mother dispatched him to a military school. There he finally began to soar.
In the case of the other Wes, there were some moments when he almost escaped. His mother was
earning a college degree at Johns Hopkins which probably would have provided the family a
ladder to the middle class when Reagan-era budget cuts terminated her financial aid and forced
her to drop out.
Then the criminal Wes almost found his footing with the Job Corps. There he earned his G.E.D.,
testing near the top of his class, and began reading at a college level. He learned carpentry skills
but afterward never found a good job and tumbled back into his old life.
A different Wes Moore, of Baltimore, hugging his daughter in prison in 2007.
The second basic truth underscored by this story is that kids can escape the whirlpool but they
need help.
The author Wes Moore escaped partly because of family support and partly because he was helped
by mentors at his military school. Not surprisingly, Mr. Moore believes passionately in mentoring,
partly because so many boys in poor families have no father at home and lack male role models. He
mentors boys and girls in Baltimore and New York and is directing some of the profits from his
book to two organizations that provide mentoring.
One is City Year, which supports young people taking a year of public service to work in
impoverished neighborhoods. Another is the U.S. Dream Academy, which supports children whose
parents are in prison (and who are consequently at great risk themselves of tumbling into trouble).
There are no quick fixes to solve poverty. But carefully conducted experiments show that some
strategies work: intensive early childhood education modeled after the Abecedarian Project,
rigorous schools like those in the KIPP network, volunteer reader tutoring like that done by Start
Making a Reader Today, and subsidized jobs programs like Canada’s Self-Sufficiency Project that
build the employment habit. These approaches have a much better record than juvenile detention
and are far cheaper.
Mr. Moore ends his book with a call to action, arguing that each of us can play a role through
volunteer work or donations. His own trajectory underscores that lives are at stake, and they can be
turned around. (The New York Times, Nicholas Kristof, June 12, 2010)
Review #2
"It takes a village to raise a child," goes the African proverb. This book is a cautionary tale of what
happens when the village is ill equipped to do so. The author, a Rhodes scholar and investment
banker, intercuts his life story with that of another young man with the same name. Both were born
around the same time in the same Baltimore neighborhood; both were fatherless; both suffered
under the weight of poverty, drugs and crime. The other Wes Moore, however, will spend the rest of
his life inside a prison cell for murder. "Wes's story could have been mine; the tragedy is that my
story could have been his," Moore writes. Of course, nothing is ever that simple. When it appeared
her son's life was headed for disaster, the author's mother moved in with her supportive parents and
found money to send him to military school. Yet despite interviews with family and the other man,
we never fully understand the other Wes Moore's motivations. The author knows it took many
helping hands to save his life. In the case of the other Wes Moore, there appears to be no clear
answer as to what went wrong. (Times Magazine, Frances Romero, May 17, 2010)
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descriptions of situations involving of drug deals, one instance of b--ch
Keeping in mind the age, academic level, and maturity of the intended reader, what is the
suggested classroom use: (check all that apply)
Gifted/Accelerated X Regular X At Risk X
GRADE LEVEL(S): 6 7 8 9 X 10 X 11 X 12 X
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Date Submitted to Department Chair: April 12, 2016